Headline Writer Is Confused or Confusing
I think a small change in phrasing could have improved the readability of this headline: "Two Charged With Castrating N.C. Man, Cutting His Ears Off" (via Men's News Daily)
posted by ziel | 8/25/2005 04:22:00 PM
2 Comments:
well, an "and" instead of the comma would have done the trick...
I wholeheartedly agree
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